Stop Snoring Remedies

ok here is more of my story that i am writing plz commet on what is good and bad about it the first page u have to look under my other questions; writing a book to understand it so here is page 2- ******
Snoring very loudly on a Saturday night, a sudden crackly noise woke Darkles with a start. ‘What the hell was that’ yelled Darkles at the top of his voice, lights started to flicker on down the halls, outside his cell. Darkles heard footsteps running by the sound of it, and a guard zoomed past with a rifle in his hand. Darkles got out of his bed. Then walked very quickly to his cell door and tried to look down the hall. He could see three guards who looked much ticked off, all holding rifles as well. They were talking very loud so it was pretty easy to make out what they were saying. The tallest of the guards said very fast paced, ‘I don’t believe he slipped out right under our noses’. ‘But where the bloody hell is he now’ said the smallest of the gu

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